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65- In the preceding sentence, the writer is considering revising the phrase “assigned to work on” to “responsible for oiling.” Given that the revised phrase is accurate, should the writer make this revision?

 

  • A. Yes, because the revision specifically describes the procedures McCoy had to follow as he maintained the wheel bearings and axles of trains.

  • B.Yes, because the revision provides a clearer con- nection between McCoy’s main task as a railroad worker and his first patented device.

  • C. No, because the revision doesn’t indicate whether McCoy chose to oil the wheel bearings and axles of trains by hand.

  • D. No, because the revision doesn’t make clear whether McCoy had worked on trains for other railroad companies.