7- The writer is considering deleting the phrase “and transform glazes to glorious colors” from the preceding sentence. Should the phrase be kept or deleted?


  • A. Kept, because it emphasizes that painting pottery is a time-consuming process.

  • B. Kept, because it is relevant to the essay’s focus on the role of kilns in making pottery.

  • C. Deleted, because the appearance of the pottery is not as important to the essay’s focus as how kilns function.

  • D. Deleted, because this level of detail is not consistent with the essay’s description of a kiln firing.